"We had an accident. Finn apparently wanted to have lunch at 5:30, and he started to walk on the counters, and as he walked across the sink's counter he plummeted to the ground. At the time, I was downstairs and I heard a loud thunk and a delayed scream. I ran upstairs and saw Finn on the ground with blood all over the floor. In the process, being me, I vomited in the sight of so much blood. Finn supposedly fell on his face and had a killer bloody nose. I ran to the bathroom and grabbed practically a whole roll of toilet paper . . ."
You'd think I'd be alarmed about the ER visit that was sure to follow, but mostly I just want to give him full props for his word choice. His use of commas to offset an appositive from the rest of the sentence ain't too shabby either.
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